No I am not looking shifty. You take that back.
Prompt word: Effervesced |
I tip the powder into my water glass with shaking hands. It effervesces with a happy sparkle that promises forgiveness of my sins; a fresh start in one fizzy mouthful.
The wrappers of a dozen chocolate bars surround me, as much a part of the autumn as fallen leaves and fireworks. I bend down to gather them up and hide the evidence of my shame for another year. They disappear in the dustbin, lost among coffee grounds and cardboard. The wrappers are gone but I am left with my belly, as soft and sagging as the rotting pumpkin underneath them.
Nice! I really like your piece!
ReplyDeleteAlways love your flashes, my flashy friend... :)
ReplyDeleteThanks guys :)
ReplyDeleteThis utterly awesome, a clear win!
ReplyDeleteI love the comparison between the pumpkin and the belly. Very original and painted the image perfectly.
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